ὣς ἔφατʼ εὐχόμενος, σχεδόθεν δέ οἱ ἦλθεν Ἀθήνη,

Μέντορι εἰδομένη ἠμὲν δέμας ἠδὲ καὶ αὐδήν,

καί μιν φωνήσασʼ ἔπεα πτερόεντα προσηύδα·

Τηλέμαχʼ, οὐδʼ ὄπιθεν κακὸς ἔσσεαι οὐδʼ ἀνοήμων,270

εἰ δή τοι σοῦ πατρὸς ἐνέστακται μένος ἠύ,

οἷος κεῖνος ἔην τελέσαι ἔργον τε ἔπος τε·

οὔ τοι ἔπειθʼ ἁλίη ὁδὸς ἔσσεται οὐδʼ ἀτέλεστος.

εἰ δʼ οὐ κείνου γʼ ἐσσὶ γόνος καὶ Πηνελοπείης,

οὐ σέ γʼ ἔπειτα ἔολπα τελευτήσειν, ἃ μενοινᾷς.275

παῦροι γάρ τοι παῖδες ὁμοῖοι πατρὶ πέλονται,

οἱ πλέονες κακίους, παῦροι δέ τε πατρὸς ἀρείους.

ἀλλʼ ἐπεὶ οὐδʼ ὄπιθεν κακὸς ἔσσεαι οὐδʼ ἀνοήμων,

οὐδέ σε πάγχυ γε μῆτις Ὀδυσσῆος προλέλοιπεν,

ἐλπωρή τοι ἔπειτα τελευτῆσαι τάδε ἔργα.280

τῶ νῦν μνηστήρων μὲν ἔα βουλήν τε νόον τε

ἀφραδέων, ἐπεὶ οὔ τι νοήμονες οὐδὲ δίκαιοι·

οὐδέ τι ἴσασιν θάνατον καὶ κῆρα μέλαιναν,

ὃς δή σφι σχεδόν ἐστιν, ἐπʼ ἤματι πάντας ὀλέσθαι.

σοὶ δʼ ὁδὸς οὐκέτι δηρὸν ἀπέσσεται ἣν σὺ μενοινᾷς·285

τοῖος γάρ τοι ἑταῖρος ἐγὼ πατρώιός εἰμι,

ὅς τοι νῆα θοὴν στελέω καὶ ἅμʼ ἕψομαι αὐτός.

ἀλλὰ σὺ μὲν πρὸς δώματʼ ἰὼν μνηστῆρσιν ὁμίλει,

ὅπλισσόν τʼ ἤια καὶ ἄγγεσιν ἄρσον ἅπαντα,

οἶνον ἐν ἀμφιφορεῦσι, καὶ ἄλφιτα, μυελὸν ἀνδρῶν,290

δέρμασιν ἐν πυκινοῖσιν· ἐγὼ δʼ ἀνὰ δῆμον ἑταίρους

αἶψʼ ἐθελοντῆρας συλλέξομαι. εἰσὶ δὲ νῆες

πολλαὶ ἐν ἀμφιάλῳ Ἰθάκῃ, νέαι ἠδὲ παλαιαί·

τάων μέν τοι ἐγὼν ἐπιόψομαι ἥ τις ἀρίστη,

ὦκα δʼ ἐφοπλίσσαντες ἐνήσομεν εὐρέι πόντῳ.295

ὣς φάτʼ Ἀθηναίη κούρη Διός· οὐδʼ ἄρʼ ἔτι δὴν

Τηλέμαχος παρέμιμνεν, ἐπεὶ θεοῦ ἔκλυεν αὐδήν.

βῆ δʼ ἰέναι πρὸς δῶμα, φίλον τετιημένος ἦτορ,

εὗρε δʼ ἄρα μνηστῆρας ἀγήνορας ἐν μεγάροισιν,

αἶγας ἀνιεμένους σιάλους θʼ εὕοντας ἐν αὐλῇ.300

Ἀντίνοος δʼ ἰθὺς γελάσας κίε Τηλεμάχοιο,

ἔν τʼ ἄρα οἱ φῦ χειρί, ἔπος τʼ ἔφατʼ ἔκ τʼ ὀνόμαζε·

Τηλέμαχʼ ὑψαγόρη, μένος ἄσχετε, μή τί τοι ἄλλο

ἐν στήθεσσι κακὸν μελέτω ἔργον τε ἔπος τε,

ἀλλά μοι ἐσθιέμεν καὶ πινέμεν, ὡς τὸ πάρος περ.305

ταῦτα δέ τοι μάλα πάντα τελευτήσουσιν Ἀχαιοί,

νῆα καὶ ἐξαίτους ἐρέτας, ἵνα θᾶσσον ἵκηαι

ἐς Πύλον ἠγαθέην μετʼ ἀγαυοῦ πατρὸς ἀκουήν.

τὸν δʼ αὖ Τηλέμαχος πεπνυμένος ἀντίον ηὔδα·

Ἀντίνοʼ, οὔ πως ἔστιν ὑπερφιάλοισι μεθʼ ὑμῖν310

δαίνυσθαί τʼ ἀκέοντα καὶ εὐφραίνεσθαι ἕκηλον.

ἦ οὐχ ἅλις ὡς τὸ πάροιθεν ἐκείρετε πολλὰ καὶ ἐσθλὰ

κτήματʼ ἐμά, μνηστῆρες, ἐγὼ δʼ ἔτι νήπιος ἦα;

νῦν δʼ ὅτε δὴ μέγας εἰμὶ καὶ ἄλλων μῦθον ἀκούων

πυνθάνομαι, καὶ δή μοι ἀέξεται ἔνδοθι θυμός,315

πειρήσω, ὥς κʼ ὔμμι κακὰς ἐπὶ κῆρας ἰήλω,

ἠὲ Πύλονδʼ ἐλθών, ἢ αὐτοῦ τῷδʼ ἐνὶ δήμῳ.

εἶμι μέν, οὐδʼ ἁλίη ὁδὸς ἔσσεται ἣν ἀγορεύω,

ἔμπορος· οὐ γὰρ νηὸς ἐπήβολος οὐδʼ ἐρετάων

γίγνομαι· ὥς νύ που ὔμμιν ἐείσατο κέρδιον εἶναι.320

    The uncertainty about whether Telemachus is up to the task of searching for his father seems to be resolved. He will sail off to Pylos, but with little encouragement.

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    Leokrites has spoken for the local citizens and Antinous for the suitors, neither holding out much hope for Odysseus’s return or voicing any support for Telemachus. He is on his own, except for Athena, exactly the situation we will find Odysseus in when we meet him in Book 5. As he makes his way to Pylos and then Sparta, Telemachus will learn about Odysseus. In the process, he will grow up by leaving his mother’s protection and entering his father’s world, as every young man must do to reach maturity. He will begin to show signs of his genetic inheritance, responding to people and events along his journey in ways that foreshadow Odysseus’s behavior.

    We can understand these parallels from inside the story, what we expect of a father and son. But we can also see in the portrait of Telemachus another example of the poet’s use of repeated forms to create meaning through accretion. Repetition occurs, as we have seen, on many levels throughout the poem, of single words, phrases, verses and groups of verses, of entire scenes and large-scale narrative patterns. The poet’s method in all these cases is to use the repeated elements to build up thematic associations that suggest parallels. Each time a repeated element appears in a different context, it picks up additional resonance.

    The portrait of individual heroes is the product of the same kind of layering of repeated characteristics. In the Iliad, we see the uniqueness of Achilles in Books 19–22 against the background of what he shares with the figure of Diomedes as the latter appears in Books 5 and 6. When Achilles withdraws from the Greek camp and refuses to fight, Diomedes becomes a surrogate for him, leading the charge against the Trojans. He is told by Athena that he is not to fight against gods, and when Apollo warns him off, he desists (Il. 5.441–52). Later on, Achilles, enraged by Hector’s killing of Patroclus, is clogging up the river Scamander with Trojan corpses. Warned by the god of the river not to persist, he refuses and nearly dies as a result (Il. 21.214–331). Diomedes and Achilles are both fierce fighters, but Diomedes observes limits, while Achilles does not.

    Penelope in the Odyssey can be understood in the same way. Calypso, Nausicaa, Arete, Circe, the Sirens, Clytemnestra, all portray some aspects of the queen’s complex and mysterious character. Like Calypso and Circe (and perhaps in a more dangerous way, Clytemnestra), she can be seductive and controlling, as the suitors learn; when the circumstances demand it, she assumes a regal authority, standing in for the absent king as Arete does in the Phaeacian court; her awakening from passivity in Book 18 and response to the beggar in Book 19 are built on the figure of Nausicaa in Book 6. All of these characters are only partial realizations of the formidable woman Odysseus meets when he returns to Ithaka.

    Likewise, we have seen that Athena/Mentes, Mentor, and Athena/Mentor are surrogates for Odysseus, standing in for him to advise his son. Telemachus joins the succession when he breaks with the suitors and the local citizens decline to help him, becoming like his father a solitary traveler aided only by Athena. Menelaus, in his own stories about coming home from Troy, becalmed in Egypt, relying on a friendly nymph, and in the future that Proteus predicts for him, foreshadows parts of Odysseus’ journey (4.351592). Theoclymenus, the mysterious traveling seer who catches a ride to Ithaka with Telemachus, adds another shading to the portrait (15.222–81). Perhaps most important of all are the various personae that Odysseus creates before his hosts on the way home, leading lives that offer a detached perspective on the heroic identity he hopes to reaffirm in Ithaka. When Odysseus throws off his final disguise as beggar, all these approximations come together to form the remarkable figure who triumphs over the suitors and wins back his wife.

    The poet signals in various ways that Telemachus is now fully committed to leaving home and pursuing Athena’s plan. When he goes to the seashore to call on the mysterious god who came to him disguised as Mentes, Athena returns, as Mentor this time. The parallels to Achilles summoning his mother Thetis in Book 1 of the Iliad (see above, p.5) are again instructive. Achilles’s mother offers no resistance to her son’s self-destructive attitude toward his comrades. She will go to Zeus and see to it that the Greeks suffer—and in some cases, die—because they will not accede to his demands. Athena’s response is more constructive. She expects Telemachus to live up to his genetic inheritance:

    "Τηλέμαχ᾽, οὐδ᾽ ὄπιθεν κακὸς ἔσσεαι οὐδ᾽ ἀνοήμων,
    εἰ δή τοι σοῦ πατρὸς ἐνέστακται μένος ἠύ,
    οἷος κεῖνος ἔην τελέσαι ἔργον τε ἔπος τε:
    οὔ τοι ἔπειθ᾽ ἁλίη ὁδὸς ἔσσεται οὐδ᾽ ἀτέλεστος.
    εἰ δ᾽ οὐ κείνου γ᾽ ἐσσὶ γόνος καὶ Πηνελοπείης,
    οὐ σέ γ᾽ ἔπειτα ἔολπα τελευτήσειν, ἃ μενοινᾷς.
    παῦροι γάρ τοι παῖδες ὁμοῖοι πατρὶ πέλονται,
    οἱ πλέονες κακίους, παῦροι δέ τε πατρὸς ἀρείους.
    ἀλλ᾽ ἐπεὶ οὐδ᾽ ὄπιθεν κακὸς ἔσσεαι οὐδ᾽ ἀνοήμων,
    οὐδέ σε πάγχυ γε μῆτις Ὀδυσσῆος προλέλοιπεν,
    ἐλπωρή τοι ἔπειτα τελευτῆσαι τάδε ἔργα."

    "Telemachus, you are neither thoughtless nor a coward, 
    if your father’s strong force is instilled in you—  
    such a man he was for accomplishing words and action— 
    your journey will not be in vain or go unfinished. 
    But if you are not his offspring and Penelope’s, 
    I have no hope that you will accomplish what you intend. 
    For few children turn out to be the equal of their fathers; 
    more of them are worse, and only a few are better. 
    But since you are neither thoughtless nor a coward, 
    and the mind of Odysseus has not entirely given out in you, 
    then I have some hope that you will accomplish these things."

    Odyssey 2.270–80

    Athena’s support, unlike Thetis’s, has conditions. She will help Telemachus if he steps up to his father’s legacy.

    Antinous tries to draw Telemachus back into the fold. Why not eat and drink with the suitors as he used to do? But the young man’s blood is up. When he was a child (νήπιος, 313), he was willing to let them eat up his possessions; now he is grown up (μέγας εἰμὶ, 314); he has heard the truth and he understands, so he will be sailing soon. He shucks off Antinous’s chummy grip and vows to destroy the suitors, either by going to Pylos or at home. But he will go. This new assertiveness draws nervous speculation from the suitors: maybe he will bring back reinforcements from Pylos or go on to Ephyre to get poison for their wine; better yet, maybe he will die and they can divide up his possessions.

    Done with sparring, Telemachus calls his childhood nanny Eurykleia to his father’s storeroom, to pack up supplies for the journey. The old woman is alarmed. Why is he leaving home? The suitors would have killed Odysseus when he returned, but he is already dead, and they will do the same to Telemachus. Telemachus recognizes the voice of his mother here, and orders Eurykleia not to reveal his absence to Penelope for eleven or twelve days. Odysseus too will silence Eurykleia, when she sees his scar in Book Nineteen and is about to identify him, thus blowing his disguise. He orders her to keep his secret, even from Penelope. This exchange affirms what the poet has been building toward since the assembly, putting Telemachus in his father’s place as a lone, endangered traveler on a crucial mission, which must begin with his separation from Penelope.

     

    Further Reading

    Edwards, M. 1987. Homer, Poet of the Iliad, 61–71. Baltimore: Johns Hopkins University Press.

    Van Nortwick, T. 2008. The Unknown Odysseus: Alternate Worlds in Homer’s Odyssey, 74–78. Ann Arbor: University of Michigan Press.

     

    268  εἰδομένη: “making herself look like,” with dative (LSJ εἴδομαι 3).

    268  δέμας … αὐδήν: accusatives of respect.

    271  ἐνέστακται: “is instilled in,” 3rd sing. pf. mid./pass. > ἐνστάζω, with dative.

    271  ἠύ: neut. nom. sing. > ἐΰς.

    272  οἷος: “(considering) what sort of man …,” indirect exclamatory sentence, with introductory verb omitted (Smyth 2885b).

    272  τελέσαι: explanatory (epexegetical) infin., explaining οἷος.

    273  ἔπειθ᾽: ἔπειτα, “then,” used in the apodosis of a conditional to express a logical consequence.

    275  ἔολπα: “hope,” “think it probable,” 1st sing. pf. act. indic. > ἔλπω. Introduces an accusative (σέ) and infinitive (τελευτήσειν) construction of indirect discourse. The verb is causal (“cause to hope”) in the present active, but simply means “hope” in the middle and the perfect and pluperfect, and takes a future infinitive.

    275  : understand ταῦτα (or τάδε ἔργα, as in line 280) as the antecedent.

    277  οἱ πλέονες: οἱ here is the masculine nominative plural article, making the comparative adjective a substantive (Smyth 1102b).

    280  ἐλπωρή: understand ἐστί.

    281  τῶ: “therefore.”

    281  ἔα: imperat. > ἐάω.

    284  ὃς: the antecedent is θάνατον.

    284  ἐπ᾽ ἤματι: “in a single day.”

    284  ὀλέσθαι: Stanford calls this an infinitive of result. It’s also possible that οὐδέ … ἴσασιν θάνατον … πάντας ὀλέσθαι is an indirect statement: “they don’t know that they all will die a death…,” making  θάνατον a cognate accusative with ὀλέσθαι.

    285  ἀπέσσεται: fut. > ἄπειμι.

    286  στελέω: uncontracted contract fut. > στέλλω.

    288  ὁμίλει: imperat.

    289  ἄγγεσιν: = ἐν ἄγγεσιν, dative of place (loc.).

    289  ἄρσον: “stow,” aor. imperat. > ἀραρίσκω.

    290  μυελὸν ἀνδρῶν: not cannibalistic “marrow of men,” but “nourishing food for men.”

    294  τάων: = τούτων νηῶν, partitive gen.

    294  ἐπιόψομαι: “I will look at (in order to choose)” > ἐφοράω (Cunliffe ἐφοράω 5).

    294  ἥ τις ἀρίστη: = νῆα ἥ τίς ἐστιν ἀρίστη, supply the antecedent and the verb.

    298  φίλον… ἦτορ: accusative of respect. φίλον, here, is possessive, “his.”

    300  ἀνιεμένους: “flaying” (LSJ ἀνίημι II.5).

    301  ἰθὺς: “straight towards,” with genitive. 

    302  ἔν … οἱ φῦ χειρί: “clung to his hand” (LSJ ἐμφύω II.2). This line is highly formulaic. 

    302  ἔκ τ᾽ ὀνόμαζε: “called him out by name.”

    305  μοι: ethical dative (Smyth 1486).

    305  ἐσθιέμεν καὶ πινέμεν: infinitives as imperatives.

    310  οὔ πως ἔστιν: “it is in no way possible for (acc.) to (infin.)…” (LSJ εἰμί A.VI). Understand με as the accusative, agreeing with the accusative adjectives ἀκέοντα and ἕκηλον in the next line.

    312  ἦ οὐχ ἅλις ὡς: “is it not enough that…?” (LSJ ἅλις 3).

    315  μοι: dative of possession.

    316  ὥς κ(ε): “how I will …,” introducing a future more vivid conditional relative clause. ὥς is in origin an ablative of the neuter relative pronoun, meaning “in which way,” and has that function here (Smyth 2989).

    316  ὔμμι: = ὑμῖν, dative with compound verb (ἐπιἀλλω).

    316  ἐπὶ … ἰήλω: 1st sing. aor. act. subj., tmesis > ἐπιάλλω.

    317  αὐτοῦ: “right here.”

    320  ἐείσατο: 3rd sing. aor. mid. indic. > εἴδομαι.

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    Thomas Van Nortwick and Rob Hardy, Homer: Odyssey 5–12. Carlisle, Pennsylvania: Dickinson College Commentaries, 2024. ISBN: 978-1-947822-17-7 https://dcc.dickinson.edu/homer-odyssey/ii-267%E2%80%93320